Shadows cease this jaunt
Sheds life's strings; ending hour
Light flight; heavens sight
Grudge stole her dear one
Mirage, deceit; was it both?
Love now lined on strings
Desires sway galore
Visible none; world conceals
Cark strings them in soul
For Haiku Heights Prompt #52 - String
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Wow ur so good at haikus....I seriously can never learn them properly :)
powerful haiku, terrific
Lovely!
Wow - wonderful and powerful
Great stuff..goes really deep I can feel it :)..tk care
Fiducia,
You are such a gem! and your verses are just mysterious sometimes. I love it! I never knew of Haiku, but now I am going to read about it. Seems interesting.
Here's my new post http://dharbarkha.blogspot.com/2011/07/if-education-was.html
Would love to hear from you.
such depth in these haiku. esp that second one, Fiducia.. it is so lovely!
Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!
incredible.
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