'Tritina' is a ten- lined poem, divided over 3 tercets and a single line. It is related to the 'Sestina', as it uses three end words that are repeated in the poem. In the last line, all three words are used. I've tried my hand at this. Hope it sounds good. :)
Shivery shades whisper, not fear what's eternal,
Percolating soft winds, angels sanctify our love,
Disarray disappear, a bond in tranquility stays,
In your embraces of sensuous passion, ecstasy stays,
Inhaling your perfumed breath, invokes joy, eternal,
Memories, moments, so vintage, endured lay our love,
Heaves to afflict; urging your presence be eternal,
Seraphic feeling lingers, this essence of our love,
Heart beats one in time, warmth in oneness stays,
Aging wine, sweeter in time; as eternal our love stays.
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I have never encountered a tritina before yours. Now I'm going to have to try my hand at it. Thank you for the challenge!
How romantic and sweet and beautiful :)
An interesting form for an interesting poem. If it is as difficult as it looks, you did a remarkable job to produce something so lovely.
Beautiful and creative and special. Thank you for the invitation to this blog. You show great talent and are a wonderful writer. TO me, beauty is deep within and shared with others; compassion, love, joy, hope, comfort, encouragement, etc. When you know someone like this, it is a priceless blessing! <3
amazing.
keep it up.
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