Time bows to me, today,As I walk past the moments,
Speed craves for a say,
As I halt to ask within.
Breeze whispers in peace,
As I blindly swing in love,
Spring sways me, in ease,
As I linger the woods below.
Morning rays caress, my lust,
As, in dreams I wake, alone,
Kids smile by, to win my trust,
As I, in vain, silently moan.
Reflection, shadows my faith,
As I sink myself, in hope,
Thoughts, play a game of truth,
As I walk away, to lure the new.
Speed craves for a say,
As I halt to ask within.
Breeze whispers in peace,
As I blindly swing in love,
Spring sways me, in ease,
As I linger the woods below.
Morning rays caress, my lust,
As, in dreams I wake, alone,
Kids smile by, to win my trust,
As I, in vain, silently moan.
Reflection, shadows my faith,
As I sink myself, in hope,
Thoughts, play a game of truth,
As I walk away, to lure the new.
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11 comments:
awesome...beautiful feeling I get reading this.
Keshi.
Beautiful Fiducia! It's hard to write rhyming poetry is such a subtle way these days but you've pulled this off nicely. Bravo!
As i halt ...
nothing was same after this line .. i felt myself walking with the words here !! fabulous :)
@ Keshi: thanks a lot...
@ Gerry: I like poetry that goes in sync with rhythm.. probably, thtz why I like rhyming poetry..:) thanks for the comment!
@ lostmermaid: thtz so sweet! thks...:)
beautifull one again. Keepw riting, And also loved the pic choice.
One of the best poems I read sinc e long.
hmm... i loved the first verse the best...
like the mermaid, even i felt the flow! wonderful write up fiducia! :)
@ Indrajit: thanks a lot for the lovely comment...
@ Leo: thanks dear... :))
sweet poem Fiducia... sweet like a breeze...
@ Arun: thks a lot.. u too keep writing.. amazing blog you have there!
i feel like taking a walk in the woods... sighhhhh!!! nice nice... really impressed babes!!!
- Deeps
@ Dee: I know! We all go through these kinda feelings all the time... a walk, a talk and then back to dreams...:)
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