
Been long, since I, lost a pal over a ride.
Been long, since then, missed a soul, each while.
Been long, since I, laughed loud, than cried.
Been long, since then, felt low but never high.
Been long, since I, to ponder, gazed the sky.
Been long, since then, happiness bid good-bye.
Been long, since I gave life a second try.
Been long, since then, knew this is all a lie.
Been long, since I, wished to live than die.
Been long, since then, spent my days to sigh.
Been long, since I craved for love, besides.
Been long, since then, missed the crazy smiles.
Been long, since I, looked into his mystical eyes.
Been long, since then, he's here but not near by.
Been long, since I felt the touch, the words, so nice.
Been long, since then, felt the world splitting by.
Been long, since I thought of wiping past, but why?
Been long, since then, I embrace memories, that's mine.
Marriage
-
Moment of life
Arranged in
Rain of wishes when
Random hearts
Ignite
A
Gigantic relation of loving
Each other forever
Hello Friends how u all bee...
47 minutes ago










10 comments:
its been long since i came here!
good one fiducia! :)
I loooooove this.
I somehow feel the same.
xoxo The fifteen year old naive
good work fiducia..
enjoyed reading it :-)
What a lovely poem...I love the rhythm in this piece. Thank you for commenting on my site : )
poignant!
**Been long, since I, wished to live than die.
somehow that touched me deeply...I could relate to it too...
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
@ Leo: Yeah, its been long since you've been around.. thks for the comeback!!! and thanks for the comments too..
@ The15YearOldNaive: Hmm... nice name! and thanks for visiting my blog and also for the comments..:)
@ Amal Bose: khub bhalo khushi!!thanks for the comments and do keep reading..:)
@ The Write Girl:thanks a lot for the comment dear.. and do keep visiting!!
@ Keshi:aww... i know how it feels.. many people I know have told me abt how the feel when they read it too!!! thanks a lot dear and hugs!!!
nice write fiducia...
sad n painful words... suits me... loved it...
n thanks for cruising thro my blog...
fiducia.... nice name... wat does it mean??
hey hey!!
so now i hop on :D
and wow the picture is wonderful
and so is the been long!!
make me wanna ride down memory lane but i m hopin to make newer memories and lookin forward to it!
memories are the only treasure and no one can steal em from you!
A beautiful poem. What a great post. You do nice work.
@ Arun: Thanks a lot for the comments.. Fiducia means faith in spanish!!! ur blog is amazing.. keep visiting and blogging..
@ AD: Thanks for the comments and visiting my blog.. nice wordings..:) keep blogging!
@ Sandy: thanks a lot for the comments..ur blog is even better...:) keep blogging and keep visiting my blog too..:)
Post a Comment